And off to dreamysleeps you go. Unless of course you woke up when you thought this and had to write it down in case you forgot it. I hate it when that happens. It makes you all crotchety and then you go snapping at people for asking you a perfectly reasonable question...
Don't you?
Don't you?
Don't you?
No, just me then 😀
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I was in half wake up mode. Still treading in dreamland, but I did appreciate this little bit of nat.. read moreI was in half wake up mode. Still treading in dreamland, but I did appreciate this little bit of nature leaving a moving silhouette for me. Thanks Lorry.
isnt flamenco once reknowned as the tempting dance wherein it is more romantic than lambada and samba combined and to be able to make a poem out of this depicting a sizzling love along the way makes this woman a remarkable writer. take care
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settle, such a welcome visit and long time no see. Hope all is well with you. Yes the flamenco is a .. read moresettle, such a welcome visit and long time no see. Hope all is well with you. Yes the flamenco is a sizzler of a dance that should set the sparks flying. Thank you so much for your visit.
Hi,
I really like your poem, Dance Steps. It takes shape and considers the visual, aural and emotional that are found in dance. Dance is everywhere, one need not be a dancer to recognise it. It's nice to know when someone uses the word dance in this way.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. Your visit much appreciated.
play you Rodrigo eh!? :) must be the soccer player .... what an interesting combination of haiku and senryu .. your last line being all human ... part nature perhaps :)))))))
brilliant painting and movement in the first two lines ... leaves dancing flamenco in silhouettes .. absolutely love that .. all in black and white!! and just before dawn perhaps ... the darkest hour .. moonlit ..i'm afraid i would go very quickly back to dreamland ... and that is never the case with me .. once awake ... i get up ... great title too ... integral to your poem says i ... very fine stuff Christine .. as always
E.
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Dear Mr E. Not Rodrigo the footballer, although I expect he is quite something :) My mind on the cla.. read moreDear Mr E. Not Rodrigo the footballer, although I expect he is quite something :) My mind on the classical Spanish guitar player and composer Rodrigo. Your response made me smile. I love classical guitar, especially Spanish style. I was too late for the moonlight silhouette, although the early dawn one was just as delightful. Thank you my friend from across the pond.
lots of great Rodrigos in the world aren't there? :))))))))) yes .. classical guitar .. i had the ma.. read morelots of great Rodrigos in the world aren't there? :))))))))) yes .. classical guitar .. i had the marvelous opportunity to hear and meet Carlos Montoya .. when i shook his hand it was so surprisingly soft ..he was old then (1972) and so humble ..i was the only one who went back stage to meet him .. i felt his presence of greatness .. will never forget that scene https://youtu.be/cv2Fyjk0GGM
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Thank you for the link Mr E. That was fabulous. How fortunate to meet him in person. You see my leav.. read moreThank you for the link Mr E. That was fabulous. How fortunate to meet him in person. You see my leaves were not fluttering gently, they were strutting their stuff. Quite a strong wind that morning. Have a great day.
Hi Chris...love this Haiku; What a great dream! I love the words and how each one flows; Really nice Chris (the last line could be seductive), is it???
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Thank you Betty for your valued thoughts. All the best.
Half sleep I cannot stand for anything...I need that good, deep REM sleep to sort out the good from the sacred or secret...I love this because it is beyond beautiful...and because it a case of something mysterious and unknown....Short but quite eventful....dana
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Many thank yous Dana for your encouraging response.
Great imagery here... I could imagine the dance played out before me as I read slowly through your lovely write - nice one! :-)
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Many thanks Phill. Strange how the mind works when in half sleep. Appreciate your visit and thoughts.. read moreMany thanks Phill. Strange how the mind works when in half sleep. Appreciate your visit and thoughts. Take care.
Hints of great activities when still on the bed.Wonderful compact three lines made my morning.Thank you Chris for the lovely gift.
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Zainul, I thank you for your visit and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated my friend. read moreZainul, I thank you for your visit and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated my friend.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..