Silver Linings

Silver Linings

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(Sorry the stanza breaks didn't appear. Must be a gliche. This poem was written in four six line stanzas, and a final stanza of three lines)

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within the confines of my living room
vibrations from an undiscovered source
caused a plate glass shelf to shift
flip on one side to launch a fine set
of champagne flutes with spiral stems
into orbit
disbelief in my startled eyes
what a racket as they crash landed
on the unsuspecting wood stain
smashed to smithereens
shattered shards of sharpness
spread far and wide
no sticking plaster repair here
a disaster has taken place
my face broken my heart heavy
steps with care to survey the carnage
destruction of wedding gifts
cut glass everywhere
through an undraped window
a curious morning sun peeped in
prisms of rainbow colours danced
delight on left wreckage
turned our room into a disco
of rotating lights, ceiling to floor
softening the disappointment
a silver lining moment
they have a way of doing that

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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This was absolutely lovely, Chris. Rainbows hold a special place in my heart, because you seldom get to see one. For me, they are the ultimate symbol of hope, and for someone who deals with chronic pain and the resulting frequent depression, silver linings like rainbows are powerful reminders of God's sovereign promise of His love for me, as well as for hope, renewal, and peace.

If that truly happened, I'm so sorry that your glasses shattered, Chris. It must have been terrible to watch, particularly since they were cherished wedding gifts. Again, I felt badly about it indeed, but you managed to turn a sad experience into a happy one, even if it was only for a moment. I am grateful for your example, and promise to remember it when I need a pick-me-up on a difficult day.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Dear Laura, thank you so much for your visit and leaving such a beautiful response. I am sorry to le.. read more
Laura M.Emerson

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your warm wishes, Chris.My pain is much better controlled when it's sunny: unf.. read more



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A prism of rainbow colours dancing around the room ... crystal can have that effect. Unfortunate to lose a wedding gift but I suspect the memory will linger for a long time.
On a bright note, at least the glasses were empty ... hopefully.

Good one Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Oh yes Ted, they were empty glasses. Now if they had been filled there would have been the loss of c.. read more
Oh gosh > Makes you jump out of your skin when something like that happens
What a loss wedding gifts so precious for the memories (if not in monetary value) [we have some 50+ cheap items from good friends I think of them each time I use them - cheep items from precious friends of so long ago]


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Hello Wild Rose. Sentimental value so important when something like that happens. A gift from someon.. read more
oh my goodness! well done lass! ;) i am drinking that disappointment and loss felt ... haven't we all watched in horror as keepsakes launch, fall and crash on the floor ... but your turn is brilliant ... i am instantly healed and up lifted with all those rainbows .. i almost hear heavenly choirs ;) well done..enjoyed reading .. a delight!

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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Dear Mr E, your reviews are so uplifting. Ha ha. I didn't quite catch the heavenly choirs though :)).. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

i am keeping very well Chris, thank you ... wishing you the same
Ah, now this is priceless :) A gem of a piece Chris...there is always some shred even if a shard of positivity to come from chaos. It never is easy to see it and sometimes the events that bring it around are not so welcomed but there is always a light to be found I guess...sorry to hear about the breakages though. Lovely turn around in this piece :)

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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Ruth. Oh yes, there were some shards of positivity. That dance of sunlight certainly softe.. read more
Yes, there are 'silver linings' of divine intervention.
gently, Pat

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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

What a lovely thought Pat. That certainly makes to pause and reflect. Thank you so much dear poet fo.. read more
Out of destruction comes reconstruction and hope. I too, love rainbows!

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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Augustus. I am a firm believer that out of destruction springs forth sprigs of hope. All g.. read more
This was absolutely lovely, Chris. Rainbows hold a special place in my heart, because you seldom get to see one. For me, they are the ultimate symbol of hope, and for someone who deals with chronic pain and the resulting frequent depression, silver linings like rainbows are powerful reminders of God's sovereign promise of His love for me, as well as for hope, renewal, and peace.

If that truly happened, I'm so sorry that your glasses shattered, Chris. It must have been terrible to watch, particularly since they were cherished wedding gifts. Again, I felt badly about it indeed, but you managed to turn a sad experience into a happy one, even if it was only for a moment. I am grateful for your example, and promise to remember it when I need a pick-me-up on a difficult day.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Dear Laura, thank you so much for your visit and leaving such a beautiful response. I am sorry to le.. read more
Laura M.Emerson

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your warm wishes, Chris.My pain is much better controlled when it's sunny: unf.. read more
I enjoyed this write, quite intriguing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Many thank yous for the review. Pleased you enjoyed the read.

Chris
after the wreckage of life, there are rainbows, prisms,
silver linings...we just have to find them... I taught a story to my students called "the destructors" by Graham Greene about a gang of kids who destroy a house from the inside...one of the themes is how there is creation in destruction.
j.

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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Many thanks Jacob. Creation in destruction, sounds interesting. I know that name Graham Green. Was h.. read more

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