Through The Skylight

a morning gift

autumn gold wakes me
decants into thirsty skin
not a drop wasted

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

well done ... really appreciate the call of your closing line ... take the time .. never waste a drop .. our "special" days that exude our seasons are precious indeed ... to be rolled in ... reveled in .. breathed deeply in ... the haiku form is perfect for the theme ... you create an intimate and emotive scene that has power and imagination ... again .. nice one says i!
E.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Mr E for your lovely thoughts. Always appreciated, as I too appreciated the sun's blessing this morning. Bathed in it, I did :) All good wishes winging their way to you.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ......................

[Ghost of Jupiter]

You paint such a lovely scene of autumn in such a few words. A beautiful walk through golden poetry!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your lovely review. Your visit most welcome.

Chris

[Intothemilkyway]

Autumn is such a wonderful season of the year.
All you see it leafs falling and the beautiful colors they leave.
The way you have portrayed it with such splendid words it makes you enjoy it even more.
The gold of autumn makes you go back in time.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Chris

[Anjeline]

Beautifully crafted. A morning is surely a gift as it brings both a new day and new opportunities to try once again and rectify the mistakes we had done in our past. Really liked the use of "decant"

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Angeline for your encouraging review. This morning's early sunlight was indeed a welcome gift.

Chris

[Anjeline]

My pleasure dear Chris :)