New Shoots

September sun has slipped from sight,

in rich delight a sky allures.

She wears a shade of crimson rose

that floods the river as he flows.

I find my thoughts return to you.

In solitude there comes a swell,

a tide of warmth that rushes in.

Its sweetness heady like a scent

for love is wondrous when it's meant.

I find my thoughts return to you.

You tiptoe softly on my soul,

while cosy in your mother's womb

and you for me are heaven sent.

I love you with my heart's content.

I find my thoughts return to you.

When you arrive what happiness

will bless us with your tiny ways.

November days will gift us spring.

New life, new shoots, new everything.

I find my thoughts return to you.

Reviews

[Eilis]

A lovely prospect to look forward to by you, Chris! The joy and anticipation of a new baby are some of the most exciting days to experience. Everything is fresh and possible and before you. That new presence brings so much to every day.

Congratulations! I enjoyed the structure of this. It reminded me of a villanelle with the repeated line. You are always good at structured poetry. I should try harder at that.

A lovely poem. Makes me happy to read.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Eilis. A new arrival is a source of joy in a world where there is little. We are excited. I had a strong desire to revert to structure when I wrote these lines. Like going back to my roots. Sometimes I deviate, sometimes I mix it up, but classical is where I did my learning. Thank you so much for your review. I always like to hear your thoughts. The fact that the read made you happy, is an added bonus.

Chris

[kentuck14]

Yes . . . the first command of God . . . "go forth and populate the earth." And in the doing what joy it brings to all who are aware enough of the miracle of life.
T

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tom. We are all looking forward to the new arrival.

Chris

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

I like that beautiful composition of your lines and the blessings of reminder that lies within it. Its hope of have a better time and the expectation of a turnaround.

Wonderfully penned, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kay. I appreciate very much your kind words and your visit. Most appreciated.

read moreThank you Kay. I appreciate very much your kind words and your visit. Most appreciated.

Chris

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

The pleasure is mine... Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Then I thank you again Kay :)

[Dave]

What a beautiful write. I may be wrong, but I get the impression you are writing of the expected arrival of a new baby, What a joyous way you speak of its expectation.

Thank you and take care - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

You are right Dave. Another grandchild is due in November and we are all looking forward to his arrival. There hasn't been a new baby in our family for sometime. Thank you for your lovely review.

Chris

[Dave]

Great!! Congratulations! There is always something special about a baby! Very best of luck to all of you.
Love - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Dave :))

[lightsong]

You leave us here with nothing to say... one would not want to say anything but to keep dwelling in the gentle kind glamor You've weaved for us, around us, around our hearts and beings, one of You finest pieces from those which I've read till now, my very favorite, one will think of the Love they have for someone, and at the same time, one will think of Love for God above, will think of Love that is abounding everywhere at any minute... a generous special piece, a masterpiece of Divine. Thank You Chris for such a majestic pen and poetry You delight, satisfy and bless us with ❤️️.

[Chris Shaw]

I am thrilled dear Light that you enjoyed this poem so much and thank you for leaving me such a thoughtful and lovely review.

Chris

[lightsong]

You deserve it and even more dear Chris for sharing such sheer brilliance.

[Chris Shaw]

Now you have got me blushing dear Light :)

[Patricia Wedel]

The miracle of birth... nourishment from Mother...
taking what is needed to form a person who will
bless the family many times over. A heart beating
with silent sighs... preparing for an entrance to be
a celebration. Congratulations... Grandmother and
family. truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous for this lovely review Pat. Yes we are all looking forward to the new addition in our family. Your visit most welcome and appreciated.

Chris

[TheJordBaker]

Absolutely wonderful write, so strong and eloquent throughout and of course finishing the stanzas with 'my thoughts return to you' is perfect.

[Chris Shaw]

I'm pleased you enjoyed the read Jordan. All good wishes and thanks for your visit.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful words shared dear Chris.
"When you arrive what happiness
will bless us with your tiny ways.
November days will gift us spring.
New life, new shoots, new everything.
I find my thoughts return to you."
I loved the above lines. I love the four seasons and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. Congratulation dear Chris.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous Coyote for your wonderful review. All good wishes.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Chris.

[nazia]

Congratulations....... a new presence to look forward to fills us all with such excitement...
One of the happiest poems I have read today :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much nazia, your response very much appreciated.

Chris

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

O! Congratulations! I'm reminded of Luke 12:7: “But every hair of the hairs of your heads is numbered, therefore you shall not be afraid, because you are better than a multitude of sparrows.” That you have written this before the birth is so very special. How excited you must be for November's spring.

[Chris Shaw]

I AM excited Linda, there hasn't been a birth in the family for quite some time. I appreciate your visit.

Chris