Wow, these last two poems of yours are a deviation from the norm for you! I like it! Just proves a good poet can write in any style! I grew up in New Jersey and we had many weeping willows in our yard. I pictured them as I read your words. Lydi**
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Thank you Lydi**. Pleased this haiku reminded you of your younger days and the willows in your yard... read moreThank you Lydi**. Pleased this haiku reminded you of your younger days and the willows in your yard. Your review so appreciated.
dear Christine... A young girl's tresses are similar to
a young weeping willow... and as time goes by she
may be playful in a more delicate sway to the music
of her heart. Your Haiku is like a flute that whistles by day.
truly, Pat
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I love your thoughts Pat. Willow tree movement is certainly inspirational. Thank you so much.
.. read moreI love your thoughts Pat. Willow tree movement is certainly inspirational. Thank you so much.
So nicely done. As you know - I seldom take the time to really think about my manner of writing, so I appreciate it when someone does.
Take care - Dave
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Thank you Dave for your visit. I will call on you later. I owe you some reads. All the best.
.. read moreThank you Dave for your visit. I will call on you later. I owe you some reads. All the best.
Hmmm...
This is wonderful.
I like the shortness with its contents.
They are mind-driving.
Thumbs up.
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Thank you Kay. Haikus actually need quite a bit of thinking. Thanks for your visit my friend.
.. read moreThank you Kay. Haikus actually need quite a bit of thinking. Thanks for your visit my friend.
A few days on the river Thames last week. Yes Ron, very beautiful. Willow trees have such grace.Than.. read moreA few days on the river Thames last week. Yes Ron, very beautiful. Willow trees have such grace.Thank you for your visit.
This is a glorious Haiku Chris! Beautiful imagery and metaphor of Weeping Willows and young girl’s dresses. Graceful, delicate, perfect!
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You have left me a beautiful review Annette and I truly appreciate that. Thank you my friend.
.. read moreYou have left me a beautiful review Annette and I truly appreciate that. Thank you my friend.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..