The Book of Us

(one from the archives)

That book of us, is slim it's true,

its hardback cover turquoise blue,

its title bold, its letters gold

and there upon a page inside

in print that's smudged by tears which fell,

the only words I wish to say

and why with pain I walked away.

"I loved you well but I could tell

that butterfly inside of you

had squandered us, had wandered on

with ease it seems and little fuss.

My dear you were the death of us."

Reviews

[lightsong]

Gosh my dear! how with your masterful pen You brought unrequited love alive again. there is love, but there is not equal love, no equal give and take... how much courage it takes one to be firmed and decide to walk away, not only for oneself but also to the other part, to leave them so they can learn and grow. I find real wisdom here dear Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks for your thoughtful review lightsong. Pleased to have you stop by.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

To remember past hurts and to finally understand how they happened is freeing. Tears shed over another person wear away the soul, but understanding helps us move on. Your rhyme and rhythm are always spot on. Great work. Lydi**

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Lydi**. Your thoughts very welcome.

Chris

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's a nostalgia to this piece that speaks eloquently to the heart. You've penned it beautifully, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Kelly. Yes, a little nostalgia here that still pulls at the heart. All good wishes, hoping you are well.

Chris

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is too phenomenal, Chris.
You've written so well on what I would call a mystery of relationship.
The pains we passed through, the joy we should have enjoyed and a hope that staggered, sometimes give us a painful reason to move on.
It's never a good experience but ever a wonderful story to tell.

Brilliantly writing!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kay for your thoughtful and beautiful review. All good wishes.

Chris

[Weeping willow]

Such a heartfelt and beautiful write ;-} loved the emotions flowing through it.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Weeping willow thank you so much for your lovely review. Pleased you enjoyed the read.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

The exterior of the book that held the short , sweet and sad story is stunning... but inside there are tear smudged pages held pain .... you know how to paint memories in bold beautiful colors, chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Mrudula. Your reviews are so welcome. All good wishes to you.

Chris

[LitStar]

some lost lonesome sentiment for our eyes to grace

ink well forged in your pen Ms. Christine


L.S

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks LitStar for your thoughts.

Chris

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Some people run away when they feel too much.
So glad you pulled this solid piece of poetry from the past out so we could take it in.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dale for your thoughts on this one. Much aporeciated.

Chris

[Onlyme]

Wow, what a remarkable poem Chris, nicely mixed to perfection about life, love, living and romance, the hurts and pains The book of life true enough Chris. That we all at add to daily in our own life's. And what hurts us makes us stronger in the long run no matter regards romances and life in general. Even though at the time. We don't ever think we will overcome the hurt and rejection caused by someone who was once so closed to us. But we do. Eventually. And yes it does leave a mark on our heart and soul. And adds to our chapter in our life's book.

[Chris Shaw]

All part of life's rich tapestry Dawn. Thank you for your lovely review.

Chris

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

“My dear you were the death of us.”- the penultimate final chapter of an ‘us’. Chris, your lyrical style and deft rhyme combined with stellar metaphor use, create a perfect poetic rendering of an exhausted relationship. Yes, butterflies are free and love, often, is not. And so, we let it go... Beautiful, personal, meaningful poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Hard to let go Annette, but it is a brave face on the inevitable. Thank you so much for your lovely response.

Chris

[Gee]

Bootiful Chris, bootiful.
How many will relate to this eh !!
Your archives must be some size m'dear :))
Hope you are well

[Gee]

Oops, hope you don't mind me shortening your name, very forward of me :)

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Gee. Course not. I'm Chris. Only Christine if you get mad at me. I always knew when I was in trouble as a kid! My archives will be running out of bounty soon. I need to get writing more :) Many thank yous for your visit.

Chris