Wind Of Change

(Plants talking)

  

    forsythia sways

 fickle in the April breeze

    losing direction

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Fickle forsythia .... I love it! Yes it does seem as though plants lose their direction in the early days of Spring. But, as Jacob says, with the coming of summer they glow in their true glory! Our garden is just waking up, and it is wonderful to see. Your Haiku is very good, especially as it has universal undertones, and can be applied to many other things.

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely to see you here Great Aunt Astri. Many thanks for your thoughtful response. All good wishes.

Chris

[AYVID N]

Hello Chris!
Your choice of words is so beautiful and enthrals a word-lover! Stunning images of the flower going wayward in the April breeze. Your words have a deeper undertone for me though. I just loved this senryu 💕

[Chris Shaw]

Dear DIVYA, so pleased you picked up on the undertone. It was the undertone that inspired the write. Many thank yous. It is so good to see your lovely face gracing the forum again, fav poetess.

Chris

[AYVID N]

Of course Chris! I could clearly picture a lady facing the challenges brought by those winds of change. Thank you, my dear friend, I so appreciate the warm welcome 💕

[barleygirl]

I love this for how you pack such dynamic sensory vividness into it! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris Shaw]

Aw Margie, thank you so much. Such a little write and yet such high praise from you:)

Chris

[john l smith]

One of spring's early colors nicely championed
a pert presentation full of optimism
Just love that spelling checker

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Dave. Beautiful splash of yellow blossom. Hope I have spelt it right. Good afternoon from me.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but once again it will find direction as it leans toward the light of the sun.
wonderful image here, Chris
excellent haiku...

j.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Jacob. Yes, the cool wind will cease and forsythia will focus on stretching towards the sun.

Chris

[lizardbrain]

beautiful! plant communication is so intriguing

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous lizardbrain. Nature speaks to me in a big way. I appreciate your visit and kind comment.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

a lovely haiku image Chris .... perfect :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Stella, pleased you enjoyed it.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

loads of people on this site think they can write haiku... but they really have no idea how difficult it is to get them right, others praise them because they have no idea either .
So see a perfectly written one like this is a real treat :)

[Chris Shaw]

It took a while. In fact I was thinking about it yesterday, but got it on to paper today. Thanks Stella.

[Stella Armour]

my pleasure.... it is beautiful :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Got that hummm factor ... really great structure in what I feel is a brilliant format. The forsythia is also known as the 'Easter tree' - so - very seasonal to boot - >;)

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Phill for your response. I appreciate your thoughts.

Chris

[Rye]

so very nice, well written

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Ryanna, pleased you enjoyed my lines

Chris