Venus Visits

Beyond the view of waning moon

suspended in a pre-dawn sky,

I searched for sequin studded stars.

Alas their presence was concealed,

though near appeared a planet bright

revealed serene in argent light.

The vast and open heavens drew

a crescent smile from sleepy moon

attracting planet's rounded eye.

And there they stayed in harmony,

content to be in company

till daybreak chased the dark away.

Reviews

[Dave]

I too love gazing at the stars. The moon, of course is a favorite, but for constancy Venus is so beautiful. Having a telescope it is a treat to see both of these far from city lights. I'm treated with the availability of a farmhouse, in the countryside, that lets me see best on the darkest of nights. Your poetry captures much of the beauty I get to see on such nights.

Take care - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dave. That telescope comes in handy when you are sky gazing, and you living away from the city and the pollution must make for great sky viewing. Yes, Venus is a delight. All good wishes

Chris

[Dave]

You too.
Take care - Dave

[lightsong]

I can't ever write like You, You are simply amazing in painting scenes with words, another very lovely anf enjoyable read, Thank You dear Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Light. You don't need to write like I do because you pen your lines beautifully and in the most unique way. Others are thinking the same thing :)Thank you so much for your appreciation of my poem. Pleased to see you check in. All the very best to you.

Chris

[lightsong]

You make me Blush, than You dear Chris for such a great compliment.

[A hare off]

The morning sky is most beautiful when Venus makes an appearance. This poem was wonderful to read and envision.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you hare. I'm sure that isn't your real name, but thank you anyway for your appreciation. It means a great deal.

Chris

[A hare off]

It's Anthony

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Anthony :)

[Davidgeo]

I do love our morning star. You have a lovely vocabulary.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks for your visit Dave. Venus is indeed a beauty.

Chris

[john l smith]

another lovely night hour salute
I get the image of Venus sitting in the cradle looking like the man in the moon
Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dave. I appreciate the review. Venus well worth looking at.

Chris

[john l smith]

Am I safe in saying that you are up rather early
Venus viewing?

[Chris Shaw]

Not viewing Venus, more like the ceiling. Yep it is ridiculously early :)

[john l smith]

Tsk..............

[Onlyme]

Oh, Christine, this is absolutely perfect for someone who is into sky gazing. Like astronomy. As you capture the essence of it all.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Dawn. I do a bit of sky gazing but I'm not obsessive about it. Can take it or leave it. Thankyou

[Onlyme]

My hubby like it as well. Never enough clear nights and too much light pollution where we live.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

exquisitely described mystical but lifelike poem at the same time. loved this you wrote this well

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your lovely response Julie. So pleased you enjoyed.

Chris

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

I did chris hope you are well

[Chris Shaw]

All OK with me. Hope the same for you and yours Julie

Chris

[Papaya]

this is quite enchanting. it's the kind of poem that you read and then close your eyes and imagine how it might look. beautiful

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ana. It was certainly a delight to witness. Many thanks for your visit.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem. You know myth and tale is my favorite. The spirit of Venus. Always a blessing. Thank you Chris for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

I didn:t know that myth and tale is your favourite Coyote. So pleased you enjoyed this. Many thanks.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Chris.