Some Things Remain Unspoken

(my bible a birthday gift from parents when I was nine)

At the back of my battered bible,

dusty and unused

I hide my precious mementos.

A pressed red rose,

paper thin orchid petals

of a deep blue hue

and a lucky four leaf clover.

Gifts from my grandchildren.

Last year I added a Christmas card,

greetings from my friend Jen.

Who had painstakingly penned

calligraphy lettering in green

with a jolly sprig of holly

between the card's buff covers.

My fingers trace lines where her

hand worked diligently

Reviews

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

When people give us such mementos as these, they give us a part of ourselves. How precious that part and a treasure for us to cherish always. Tucked away in the Bible, reminding us all our lives that we are, we were loved. Your words made sad and grateful at the same time. Appreciated reading very much Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ditzy. Yes keepsakes to remind us always of our love for others.

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I'm going to preserve every keepsake extra carefully and treasure them even more, now that I've read this Chris. You're welcome.

[Chris Shaw]

You're young, don't fret about it. Sentimentality comes more as you grow older Ditzy :)

read moreYou're young, don't fret about it. Sentimentality comes more as you grow older Ditzy :)

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Of course...Thanks Chris. Have a nice Sunday :)

[Flowers of Eternity]

This is a very touching poem, Chris. I really love this. When we receive such things all the memories we have with them will always remain in our hearts and our minds so even if they are no longer with us, the moments we shared with each other makes it feel that they are alive. Wonderful poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear lovely Flowers of Eternity, your review so thoughtful. Thank you.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

:( so sad .. so well said Christine .. draws me in with me own memories of that battered old Bible ..i congratualte you for using a bit of free verse my friend ;) i think it suites the personal story telling quality of this .. i feel the comfort of a close friend telling me small things of great importance ..and the turn with your friends card touches the hardships of such a situation ... i am old enough to have been there more than once with both family and friends ... so i take a lot of my own comfort from your closing of "eternal sleep" .. a place of peace and comfort for me ;) tho i am doing what i can to keep that wolf away as long as i am able :)))
E.

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Mr E. Yes you keep the wolf at bay my friend. Sometimes it's best not to use rhyme, on this occasion I was pleased I didn't. Thank you for your thoughtful review.

Chris

[kitty]

Sad but so meaningful - the end. Treasured memories treasured friends stay in our hearts forever.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Kitty apologies for not thanking you sooner. An oversight on my part. All good wishes.

Chris

[Lyn Anderson]

Beautiful, and simple. the little treasures we never forget.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks for your response.

Chris

[kitty]

We look with glee the transition from this to that 'better' place where pain and suffering is no more bit when we see that the time is drawing near we tend not to want to let go of the things of this world. Facing that 'final curtain' becomes harder than we think !

[Chris Shaw]

I think you are right kitty. My friend Jen has since died, but she did her utmost to fight off what was inevitable. I think I would be the same. Thank you kindly for your thoughts. All good wishes.

Chris

[kitty]

You are welcome Chris!

[Fran Marie]

Lovely keepsakes from loveones who give of themselves ..a sweet memory
to behold and cherish.

Nicely Penned ..
.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Fran Marie. I appreciate your visit and your thoughts.

Chris

[Jon Roggie]

The little things are a treasure. Spark the memories. Some mean more than others.
Lovely write.

Jon

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jon. Your thoughts appreciated.

Chris

[Lyn Anderson]

Beautiful, and simple. the little treasures we never forget.

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, treasures indeed Lyn. Thank you.

Chris

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So moving Chris. Momentos of spirit and love. Beautiful.:)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Annette All good wishes to you.

Chris

[angel]

I also have a worn, old Bible in which I keep precious bits of flotsam, like cards, bits of flowers and leaves, and prayer cards from the funerals of loved ones.
This is an old, retired Bible. The one I currently use is a small (6"x9") volume which I can carry with me.
I think that when I pass on, I will ask for the old one to go with me.

Thank goodness for that retired Book; not much will fit inside this little one, I'm afraid!
My original Bible was, unfortunately, lost in a fire in early 1981.
Thank you so much for sharing the story of your Bible and its modern, yet still holy, treasures.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks angel for your visit.

Chris