Thought Flight

Thought Flight

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(A poem written for a friend from a photograph)

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This tranquil scene you've made your own,
where you can lose yourself in thought,
where river willows bend in breeze,
where trees reach tall to touch the sky
and glassy waters pass on by.

I stood there on the bridge today,
watched graceful swans in pairs glide past.
Though autumn russets will not last
and ochre hues give way to views
of winter and its icy stare.

I felt your presence hover there,
I knew you'd travelled in your dreams.
Whatever season of the year,
this place will bring you peace of mind,
you'll find what you are looking for.

What's more, when seen at dead of night,
when lamplight shoots its amber glow
across the calm and blackened flow,
there's no where else I'd rather be,
there's no where else I need to go.

© 2018 Chris Shaw


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Absolutely wonderful, Christine.

Your poem overflows with the peaceful serenity we experience when thinking of friends, lovers or relatives as we stand on a bridge absorbing all nature's treasures.

This was an excellent write and a pleasure to read. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Your comments very generous Tamara, thank you for your visit.

Chris
Tamara Beryl Latham

6 Years Ago

Chris, reading you poem again reminded me of something. Years ago I had "glassine" to describe a gl.. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Well it was a nice thought on your part, pity they didn't respond. :)



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There are people who might be physically absent from our lives but - with only a hint from or of him/her, one seems to be able to feel that person. Tis something special that wraps around. Lost we are without.. .. Your words really sing.. and linger, Chris.

These words are longing personified, . '.. there's no where else I'd rather be, ~ there's no where else I need to go.'

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Many thanks Em for your visit and kind review.

Chris
What a lovely scene you paint
Peace full with trailing willow trees bending to touch the gentle waters
Swans swimming past so gracefully they move
By night the lamp light glisten upon the ripples
A place to dwell on memories of time past
With more to follow

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you Wild Rose. A lovely scene indeed. Your visit most appreciated.

Chris
Christine - I've been away and I'm sorry that, so far, I've missed some of your beautiful writing, such as this.
I appreciate the calm and the love you feel expressing the calm before the approaching change of seasons.
Thank you - Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you Dave for your lovely compliment. I truly appreciate your reviews and visits. Take care
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Dave

6 Years Ago

It is such a pleasure reading what you have to offer us.

Take care - Dave
A lovely perspective elegantly portrayed.
Word-painting, Chris!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you Jimmy.

Chris
a wonderful mood in a beautiful scene

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you Dave. Pleased you enjoyed this effort. All good wishes

Chris
Some places we need to be.
What's more, when seen at dead of night,
when lamplight shoots its amber glow
across the calm and blackened flow,
there's no where else I'd rather be,
there's no where else I need to go."
I love the above lines. Thank you dear Chris for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating my lines Coyote. I am thankful.

Chris
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I love your work and you are welcome Chris.
This is beautiful Christine, and all the more impressive for being written from an image.
It reminds me of myspace (what?) where I was in a writing group and really enjoyed the daily challenges they set, one of which was a choice of images to write about.
I didn't win many, but enjoyed the challenge. I miss myspace. Simpler times :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thanks Lorry. Haven't heard about MySpace. Pleased you liked this one though. I quite enjoy writing .. read more
Lorry

6 Years Ago

Ach, you're too young to remember it :)
Absolutely wonderful, Christine.

Your poem overflows with the peaceful serenity we experience when thinking of friends, lovers or relatives as we stand on a bridge absorbing all nature's treasures.

This was an excellent write and a pleasure to read. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Your comments very generous Tamara, thank you for your visit.

Chris
Tamara Beryl Latham

6 Years Ago

Chris, reading you poem again reminded me of something. Years ago I had "glassine" to describe a gl.. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Well it was a nice thought on your part, pity they didn't respond. :)
Very beautiful scene you have created.
We will be at that place exactly where we are meant to be.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit Najam. All good wishes.

Chris
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

It was my pleasure reading this.

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