A percolated poem

(playing with words)

Do not stir your coffee

or dare to drink it

while I marvel

at movement of

cream on its surface

white swirls in black

blends without argument

creates marble

a masterpiece in a mug

forgive me for asking

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Great title and message in these eloquent verses. As the cream in our coffee is able to naturally blend, so should we stop and take the time to do the same with each other. I think that’s it. But maybe it’s just appreciation of a good cup of of coffee. Either way, it’s creative and so very clever dear Chris. Love!

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Annette. It started out as a cup of coffee but within a few minutes I saw another opportunity. Thank you.

Chris

[Island Hippy]

Love this Chris! what a masterpiece we are when get it together! Sometimes the masterpiece is a little lad like my Kalani ;) ....you’re brilliant my friend. Many mahalo x

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Izzy. Yes Izzy, you have your own little masterpiece with you. Smiling at you :))

Chris

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I salute your muse Christine!✋
You observe your surroundings so beautifully and relating that with our life extraordinarily create exceptional poetry!! Loved reading it😊

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tahsin so much.

Chris

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You're heartedly welcome!!!☕☕

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and all of us together, no matter what color...we are the cream that creates the marble art in the world..
and we should all drink of the same love.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Smiling at you Jacob and agreeing with every word you said. Thank you :))

Chris

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Brilliant
Love it
Love it !

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Julie

Chris