Absence

(Little Oscar 10 years our feline friend)

Those roses are now drained of colour,

from neglect and thirst I would say.

But the blooms that once were so scented

remain true to their virginal shape.

And though they're somewhat anaemic,

I'm not ready to part from them yet,

for dried and decaying they may be,

they're placed with respect for a pet.

Whose death gnaws away at my being,

whose ghost I am constantly seeing.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem brings so much to mind, my review may exceed the length of your poem. First, I thought about how I don’t prune my roses right away – healthier for the plant. Then I realized you’re writing about a bouquet of roses, not a plant -- I love the details you use to describe the detritus in such artful attractive terms. Finally, I’m reminded of my own kitty who ran away a few years ago & I still look after her, hoping to catch a glimpse amongst the feral community down by the creek! After getting thru all the ways I relate to your poem, I can also say I love your dedication to a furry friend (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Margie, a bouquet of roses for you, for finding so much to write about in my short poem. I am pleased it gave you much to think about. Sorry about your kitty. Must be even worse if they run away. Miss my little Oscar, such an adorable, friendly cat.

Chris

[Gee]

Jeez, I was heartbroken when my previous Spaniel died, still miss him 13 years on even though I've had another for 12 years. Never asked anything apart from being company for him.
Stirs happy memories even though sad for you Christine.
Hope you are well.......bring on the rain :))

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Gee. I am still enjoying this heat, although I have to pace myself. Early to rise, rest in the afternoon, second wind in the evening. We do so love our pets don't we? Good you have another doggie, even though you still miss your other. I am so sad about my cat, but it will pass.

Chris

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This one taps at my heart loudly..Our lil friend of 15 years departed recently and I still see her lil white fluffy feet zip across the room and round the corner before I try to focus. They know we miss them! Loving thoughts....

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Queenie. Two weeks ago, so early days. Yep, I keep seeing his little white paws and his slinky black tail all over the house, and I keep thinking I can hear him. Don't we get attached to our pets?