When The Dog Wails

we all have dark days

Even in our bleakest moments

nature brings a glint of bright.

By the river, I remember

how my darkness captured light.

I saw diamonds dance on water

as the sun broke through to play,

I recall my burden lighten

on a dreary soulless day.

All that glory there before me

for those minutes mesmerised,

as the sparkle on the surface

grew in strength, intensified.

I'm reminded when the dog wails,

when those blackest moments come,

nothing stays the same forever,

dig in deep and don't succumb.

Author's Note

sunlight dancing on the surface of water is mesmerising

Reviews

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Yess...I just feel like looking at the pond of my village river on which surface diamonds used to dance...however I haven't been there since years...
Your poems are anyway a lesson for me dear...no matter how any can fake being strong...but from his/her own soul the shreds of heart can't be hidden which was shattered at the dark days....And the glint of light does gives a look to us...hopefully dark days then goes away!!
Thanks for sharing this Christine...this was like I could relate with myself☺

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tahsin, so pleased that you could relate to this poem.

Chris

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You're heartedly welcome Christine!☺

[Neville]

The message within your post here, comes across to your reader (at least this one) both loud and crystal clear .. The hallmarks of a mighty fine bit of poetry Chris.

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Aw, you got me blushing Neville. What a very positive review. You just have to look for the light don't ya :) Big thank yous.

Chris

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow. I love this piece. Subtle, unforced rhyme. A positive coming out of the gloom, where humans dig in deep and soldier on.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Lynn for the review. Much appreciated.

Chris

[Gee]

Ahh, loved this. I'm an ever optimistic, " there's worse off than me " fella, and hopefully will always be.
Rhyming, flow spot on.
Hope all is well in Reading Christine.
Coffee, 2 spoons, 2 thirds water, 1third full fat milk, stirred anti clockwise please :))

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Gee. Pleased you enjoyed this one. All ok in sizzling hot Caversham. Getting ready for 3.00p.m. fingers crossed. Aren't you fussy with your coffee? lol. My Grandad used to ask my nan to stir his tea, you just reminded me of him!

[Gee]

I think we shared a desk at school :))

C'MON ENGLAND

[Chris Shaw]

C'MON ENGLAND, a chance for a bit of unity eh, instead of division. Has to be good.

[barleygirl]

This is brilliant & lyrical & encouraging in all the best ways! I love the title & the way you used this line in the poem. I love the description of finding light in darkness -- well crafted using the cloak of “nature” making your message straightforward but not a bit preachy. I love the way you use sensory excitement (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris Shaw]

What a lovely review Margie. I think I can safely say, you liked this poem. Smiling at you :))

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"There is a crack in everything God has made" Ralph Waldo Emerson "That's how the light gets in" Leonard Cohen...and so darkness has no part in light and yet it dances upon the darkness in joy and triumph. And ever so often the light finds that crack through which it might penetrate and enlighten; whether the mind, heart or a crack in Venetian blind. I enjoyed this read and the hope encapsulated in the final stanza.

[Chris Shaw]

Love your quotes. Know both of them, and they are so memorable. Thank you Fabian, and pleased you enjoyed what this poem offered.

Chris

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Indeed I did. Bless.

[Onlyme]

Makes me think of raining and the drops washing away the woes and sorrow of this land and human suffering. When a downpour comes. Gives hope for a new start.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dee.

Chris

[Onlyme]

Your very welcome Chris.

[Mrudula Rani]

Beautifully inspiring writing, Chri. Your wonderful out look on life and advice on patience shows faith. Finding peace in nature always nourishes soul.Mrudula.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you M. Yes nature plays an important part in my life. Helps to keep the balance.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

You are welcome, C.

[sette]

and when tetay wails at me surely she knows that i am feeling sappy and down but then that is what life is all about the ups and downs

[Chris Shaw]

Hello sette, yes there is both light and darkness, ups and downs in life. There will always be opposites. Thank you for your thoughtful response.

Chris

[peter Duggan]

Nice poem Chris. Sitting by a river or lake and seeing the beauty of life reflected on the surface. I never worry these days I just go along with nature and wallow in peace. I enjoyed your poem, my friend....Peter

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Peter, may you continue to wallow in peace. You have found what makes you content.

Chris