Aurora Borealis

It's on my bucket list as is penning a reasonable sonnet. I don't try these often.

In close cupped hands I hold a golden wish,

I kiss my thumbs, set free so it might fly.

My wish to gaze enchanted in the nights

by spirits as they dance across the sky

I'd marvel at the sight of Northern Lights

that sashay softly, swirl and glow bright green.

And then pinch-pleated curtains made from silk

that roll effusing hues of purple sheen.

Aurora, Roman Goddess of the dawn,

bring forth your lavish riches don't be shy.

Grant me one boon to kneel in front of you

and witness this first hand before I die.

Enrich my soul, delight me I implore,

don't leave me disappointed wanting more.

Reviews

[Neville]

I have never attempted one of these .. I've never dared to .. but you here my friend have done the sacred sonnet proud .. Its on my bucket list too .. went to Iceland a year or two back specifically as ya do to see them .. but missed em by ten minutes or so ........................ Neville

[Chris Shaw]

I don't do many of these Neville. They are too difficult. I can remember this one taking an age to do. Thank you for letting it breathe again.

Chris

[Jimmy Yetts]

Excellent sonnet, Chris.
A substantial offering!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jimmy, your responses always appreciated.

[Lorry]

Beautifully penned Christine. It will be interesting if you write of seeing it and looking back on the hope of this piece to see if they match.
I've been very lucky and seen it three times, Sweden, iceland and Inverness??? & ? Yep, even in Scotland. You wont be disappointed, I assure you. It is the most majestic sight I have ever seen, and to see it live is unbelievable. I'm even getting some of that excitement from just reading this.
They do plane tours over iceland, and its visible for about 200 days of the year there, so you have a better than fifty 50 chance of seeing it.
Nut in the meantime, you could check out some of the amazing videos of it on youtube which have been set to mood musoc.
Wonderful words for an otherworldly sight.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Lorry for providing me with useful information. I am very envious of you seeing this spectacular sight on three occasions and in different locations. I have only seen it on video, and that completely took my breath away, so seeing it for real must be something else. Yes if I get there, I will have to revisist this sonnet, perhaps rewrite it.

Chris

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I wish this for you too Chris. To see the ultimate electric light show in all of its iridescence snd penultimate power-aaahh. Beautiful form, flow, language, cadence and ethereal imagery. The Goddess Aurora’s ears must be ringing with your lyrical and eloquent praise. Gorgeous poem my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

High praise from you Annette. Thank you so much. Pleased you enjoyed. How is your move going?

Chris

[alanwgraham]

A worthy wonder on your wish list Christine. Being in the northern wastes of fife I have seen the a b a few times and it is a wondrous thing. You should arrange to get alerts on your p c when it's likely. Happy borealising
Cheers
Alan

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Alan, and lucky you. I am full of envy. Thanks for the heads up about the alerts, I'll give that a go.

Chris

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Almighty hears all the wishes....you're one too....
And for the good he's gonna do something to your wish!!
All the best of good luck😊

[Chris Shaw]

I hope you are right Tahsin.Z. It will be something that I would always treasure. Keeping my fingers crossed for good luck. Thank you for your thoughtful response.

Chris

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You're heartedly welcomed😊!!

[Ardra]

That's on my bucket list too ...:)
Nicely penned...I hope your wish comes true...

[Chris Shaw]

Great minds think alike Ardra, so if the Northern Lights are on your bucket list too, I also hope your wishes come true. Thank you for responding. Your comments appreciated.

Chris