Jewels of the River

Out of the mists of early dawn

that veil the river's sleepy flow

which roll across the dew-wet fields

to linger where the hedgerows grow.

In waters spiked with broken reeds

float lily leaves, small craft shaped boats,

a lonesome swan dips down to feed

beguiling in his down-white coat.

Bright sun breaks through, it glows rich gold,

the mute glides on the crystalline,

then stands in shallows near the bank,

surveying all that he deems fine.

His plumage shapes into a fan,

he preens himself, full stretches wings,

then flaps the surface, whips up drops

of crystal water which he flings

into the air with mighty force,

dispersing spray caught in the light.

Like splintered glass, ten thousand shards

of diamonds glinting in full flight,

which sparkle as they greet the sun.

Ten seconds pass, the show is done,

the gems rain down and all are lost,

beneath the river, every one.

Reviews

[Ayvid N]

Dear Chris,

I read the poem just enthralled at the climax of the scene. The spectacular things in Nature are sometimes so hidden and there must be so much of it happening if only we'd care to look for them. This was one such event that could beat a grand stage show hollow and none can compete with it's glory, nor recreate it with the best of human heads.

Once again, it's your sheer gift for bringing a thing of such breathtaking beauty in all its vividness to the reader. First, the buildup, then the introduction of the swan and then whipping up of the crystal storm and its splintering into a thousand shards, its all written with such flair and skilled beauty. I could absolutely see it in slow motion with a maestro's symphony accompanying it , in my mind.

Kudos! This was an unforgettable reading experience!

[Chris Shaw]

Divya, I thank you for your review. Thrilled I am that you enjoyed this poem. Yes, I tried to slow it all down to capture all the splendour. Lovely it was to witness. Have a great day.

Chris

[Ayvid N]

It was such a pleasure to read. You have a great day too.

[sette]

it is creatively written full of poignant words

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you sette, appreciate your time.

Chris

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Lovely - a perfect picture poetically penned describing nature's awakening! Much appreciated share my friend - bless :-)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for your kind review :))