Inheritance

Inheritance

A Poem by Chris Shaw

This beach at Maidencombe is reached
by countless steps of well-worn stone,
which open to a camber cove
of sand and shingle. On my own
I sit and contemplate the cliffs;
their curves embrace the open sea.
The sandstone, richly rugged-red
is topped by many a wind-blown tree.

And clinging to the craggy slopes
are patchwork flora, clumps of green.
From overhead the swooping gulls
disturb the silence. In this scene
salt water laps and agitates
the sea-weed caught in tidal flow,
while crested white, the crystal waves
fill thirsty rock pools feet below.

A hue of blues that span the sky
create a post-card, summer bright.
No hint of grey unwelcome cloud
to break the vista. Thoughts take flight
to bygone days, two hundred years 
when others came across this bay.
The panorama stays unspoiled
and still can thrill the heart today.

© 2018 Chris Shaw


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Hey Chris,
I did not recognise you...New photo...really charming.
I am still tying with my left finger..such a drag.
Isn't it wonderful to have a special place to sit and contemplate...wouldn't it be wonderful if more of our days were filled with these special moments..
Felt like I was there with you...
Lisa

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

It is a special place Lisa and more so because I don’t get the chance to see it much. We all need.. read more



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Good poem.

I enjoy the sea very much as well...

Great poetry.

;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. Have a lovely day.

Chris
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Thank you... I will try and wish you the same.

;)
I would love to sit and watch the cliffs on a clear summer day, especially at the sea, where the waves mesmerize and change at a moment's notice. The blues, the whites of the seagulls, the gray of the cliffs and let's not forget the texture and color of the clumps of "patchwork flora"that makes this a plce to contemplate the cosmos....love the writing Chris...
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Such a lovely review from you Betty. You are always so thoughtful with your responses. Have a lovely.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome and VERY productive!!! love it...
Have a volley weekend...
Best, B
dearest Chris… this reminds me of the White Cliffs of Dover… beautiful poetry… my friend.
This Sunday we will celebrate Mothers Day. Many 💜 hearts will Pray for Mothers everywhere… Amen. Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Dear Pat, have beautiful Mother’s Day. So pleased you enjoyed this poem and what it reminded you .. read more
You always re.create a place, feeling or with your considered respect to the theme and then, the reader.
In this poem you've reminded me of a a couple of a mfew days during which I learned how to swim in the sea! Yes, true. Now I have the urge to see everything you've included in your breathtaking poem: arhe cliffs and slioes, the crystal waves, the hue of blues! Must admit to being envious of you meter.. do you give lessons? Thank you, thank you.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Whatever and however you write is A1 and more, Chris!
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly :) Have a lovely evening Em.
emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

On the Helpline,, can only try.
A beautiful vista you paint Chris. I love the way you have taken what would be a free verse poem and have broken it up in a wonderful rhyme.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Pleased you enjoyed the read Soren. Thank you for your encouragement. All the best.

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Chris,

This is a majestic piece of excellently written Poetry that tells a wonderful story well worth the hearing ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely review Marvin. So kind of you.

Chris
Some poems leave me no words, because I am so much drowned in the sea of it's beauty and imagination.
This surely is one of them. I hope you're enjoying your time dear Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Nima, thank you so much for calling on this poem. I appreciate your visit. All is good in my world m.. read more
Nima.Hope

1 Year Ago

I'm very happy for you my dear friend.
Wishing the best for you and your lovely family❤️
while i can't say i remember much about the beach, i do remember the gleneagles in Torquay. You capture the joy of the coast so splendidly Chris. can almost taste/smell the salt in the air

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ken. Yes very close to Torquay. Pleased you enjoyed the scenery. It is a beautiful place a.. read more
Must be such a treasure to see.

Your love for it is captured in these words.

Thank you for sharing your beloved place.

~Melinda

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Many thanks Melinda.So pleased you stopped by. All the best.

Chris
ok
dang if my vocabulary doesn't take another blow
so many words unknown to me taking not the pleasure of such write as this
i see i hear i smell i taste i know the sea
your word choice again brings memories of better times better days better minds
you have done it again ms chris and i thank you
hope all is well across this majestic sea

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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Many thanks Keith for your very encouraging review. Pleased you enjoyed the view of Maidencombe be.. read more

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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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