Interlude

Gentle waves of crystal kindness,

edging closer to my feet,

as I laze upon these pebbles,

smooth and flattened on their surface,

by the power of the sea.

As I lie here contemplating

nothing more than naked toes,

empty thoughts are more than healing,

as the creeping, calming briny

cleanses me of all my woes.

Reviews

[Soren]

This is a soothing poem of nature's healing power and self reflection. Beautifully written a baptism of awareness and self enlightenment. The metaphor is amazing in its simplicity as is nature itself. The more I read it the deeper it goes. I rest upon your words like the pebbles contemplating the depths of its waves of meaning. It is so succinct that to say any part of it is my favorite it to take away from the rest.

[Chris Shaw]

Soren, thank you for such a thorough and encouraging review. I appreciate your thoughts greatly. All the best.

Chris

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lyrical perception.
A lovely portrayal of the sea's emotional renewal.
Meaningful poetry, Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased you enjoyed the read Jimmy. I appreciate your valued support.

Chris

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'interlude'
christine Anne shaw,
To bask for it's own sake is just fine with me. To enjoy the lulling tune of the waves lapping one's toes is a delight. Your above words relay a contentment which is so comforting. To enjoy the thankfulness to just be alive comes through beautifully in this poem!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Kathy, thank you for calling on my page. You are most welcome.

Chris

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Very much my pleasure to be sure.

[Ink]

Reading this and feeling the waves at my feet. Amazing

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you, pleased you enjoyed the read.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love walking near the sea. Allowing the water to surround my feet. I liked the description. Made me wish to be able to feel the coldness of the ocean water. Thank you Christine for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Wrote that while in Brixham, Devon. A place we go to several times a year. Always get inspiration to write when I am there. Thank you. I love the ocean too.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love the sea. I live in Michigan now. I have my Great lakes. Lake or Sea. Best place to gather our mind. You are welcome Christine.

[Chris Shaw]

I am very much a water person. Whether rivers, lakes, oceans, I find peace there.

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. This is why I ended-up in Michigan.