Go

I can't hate

the bird that once

came to me

and then flew away

just like I can't hold

onto the wind

or miss the clouds 

that become rain.

Reviews

[rutherford]

Powerful expression of life's transience. It's strength is in the poem's brevity.

[James Paulin]

A little bird has had a significant influence on many of us who are conditioned to intuition.

[Kaylor Mason]

Setting our loved ones free, and allowing ourselves to let go, is one of life's hardest lessons. All life is the art of letting go--it's a horrible, wonderful, bittersweet fact. This poem captures that element very well. Nice work

[Coyote Poetry]

Made the words "Go". Have strength and gave vision to the word. Your words are true. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote