In the Dark

Even in the

Darkest hour

I’ll never

Lose sight

Of love.

 

Because

Love’s dusk

Shines brighter

Then the

Sunrise of

Mere lust,

The gold of

love's sun

is anything but

The rust that

Grows on

Static hearts.

 

And if I

Didn’t believe

In love

Then I’d lose

What I have

Come to know

As what is

A part of

My soul.

 

So give me

Midnight, turn

Off the lights

And I’ll watch

The world

Be lit by

The candlelight

Of love’s stars

As their light

Glides and guides

Me through

The night,

Waiting with me

For the

Smiling sunrise.

Reviews

[Tomi]

wow! I think this' the best piece I've read this year... simple, crisp and on point.. well expresses.

[Greg Skura]

Ah yes! You have captured the essence of love with innocence and purity. This is to me is a masterpiece! Your words are always so captivating! Thank you for sharing!

[Drako]

i agree with kyncan. i too am a hopeless lover and this poem is quite inspiring. another wonderful poem

[KAREN]

Beautiful and romantic! Love the format and the flow! Makes me smile reading this.

[Deviant Works]

This is beautiful, Cassandra. I have always been a hopeless lover and found this poem inspiring and uplifting. Wonderfully done yet again.

[Robin]

I am throughly enjoying every word of this poem ~

[G. K. Bostic]

"Love’s dusk
Shines brighter
Then the
Sunrise of
Mere lust," Now that's just plain beautiful! Lovely poem Cassandra.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is hopeful and beautiful. We need to hold on tight to the dreams of love that is forever. I like the soft and tender emotion of your words. A outstanding poem of love. Thank you.
Coyote