In the Dark

Even in the

Darkest hour

I’ll never

Lose sight

Of love.

 

Because

Love’s dusk

Shines brighter

Then the

Sunrise of

Mere lust,

The gold of

love's sun

is anything but

The rust that

Grows on

Static hearts.

 

And if I

Didn’t believe

In love

Then I’d lose

What I have

Come to know

As what is

A part of

My soul.

 

So give me

Midnight, turn

Off the lights

And I’ll watch

The world

Be lit by

The candlelight

Of love’s stars

As their light

Glides and guides

Me through

The night,

Waiting with me

For the

Smiling sunrise.

Reviews

[Truman S. Booth]

Wow... the assonance was stirring. Reading this poem aloud was almost like rapping, but not in a bad way. It just flowed with such liquid rhythm... spectacular. Well done.

[Hello, Goodbye]

Absolutely brilliant.. I envy the great way that you keep control of pace and emotional composure. The imagery is captivating and the flow is perfect.

[AlisshalovesBrandon]

very gtod i like iy

[.]

"The gold of
love's sun
is anything but
The rust that
Grows on
Static hearts."
(I love this line-Beautiful)

~You are very creative~Great Poem~

:)

[Richard Williams]

Fine light on the divergence of heart and gland framed by a gifted artist's hand.

[Linear]

Now thats just beautiful, poetry in it's fluidity, makes the words shimmer like the twinkling stars of the heavens. Well done

[Calypso]

This was warming and something everyone should remember. Never loss sight of love.

[InkSlinger]

Nice pace, short lines deliver more impact. Over all a good job! Keep up the nice work.. we are all watching your work set the standard..

[sarah]

This is fantastic!

[Julie Beth]

great job :)