If you look in the telescope

You see I’ll love you forever

Because it is written in the stars;

It is my destiny, my fate

To be your light, your shining sunrise,

Your music in silence.

 

You’re curved and warm

And full of excitement

Your eyes pleasant summer waves.

Your soul the sand,

The essence of the beach.

 

Your voice the beats

Of your heart.

Your laugh a child at play,

And my love for you

Like the flowers

That children find

That make their hearts dance wildly.

Reviews

[Moonflower]

This was especially beautiful and tender, I really loved the last stanza...it was all just overwhelmingly joyful. :) Wonderful writing, I enjoyed the structure and rhythm of this as well..

[Rikkevi Rue]

and when she realized that she was just within...she glimpsed up and saw that there was a greater design in the universe...