Pencil Lines

Pencil lines
on my paper
become something more
a picture?
a story?
only time will tell
my friend
please stay
and watch
my progress
as the details unfold
and show themselves
to you and me
only time will tell
what it shall be

Reviews

[mariah]

nice job! i like the general flow of the poem ad what you are discribing seeme to happen to me alot lol.

[Donald Meikle]

but Time is so one way