Untitled Work of Friends

Untitled Work of Friends

A Story by V.S.L.
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Let's write a story together. I'll start it, give it a premise. Leave the next part in the reviews.

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       It was all she could do to keep running. Rose was tired of running, of being scared. Who were these guys? What did they want from her? Why did they kill Mark? She had been asking herself these questions every day for the past six months, and still she had no answers. She only knew that if she stopped running they were going to kill her. Or worse...
       She needed to stop for the night. She was dirty, tired and hungry. She could barely keep her eyes open any longer. She didn't even know why these people were chasing her. She didn't do anything. She didn't do anything to provoke these people, and yet, they were still chasing her. She saw the neon of a motel sign in the distance. She drove the last five miles to a run down motel called The Moosehead Inn. 
       Rose didn't even know where she was, she just drove every day without seeing. All she knew was that she was not going back to New York City. Yes it was a large city but she couldn't afford being seen there by the wrong people. She was pretty sure she was headed towards Washington State but wasn't sure she was even headed in the right direction.
Rosalind:
Out of the blue this cottage appeared from no-where. And Rose needed a safe haven to rest her weary head. The old woman answered the door gazed at Rose and smiled.
" You'd better had come in she sounded a concerned voice." 
" thank you Ma i just need a couple of nights to gather my thoughts together."answered, Rose.

" I'll just show you your room, help yourself to a bath and i just get the supper ready."
Rose was feeling so relieved she ran off a bath and sank deeper into a mountain of bubbles...
She forgot about her troubles for a quick moment. Soon Rose felt clean and she quickly dried herself and put on the night things laid onto the bed..... Rose knocked on the lounge door.
"Do make yourself at home the tea has brewed said Mrs Smith."
" Thanks,' For your hospitality."
" No problem my dear."
later that night she heard a thud and woke up rather started there in the garden were two strange men with guns. Was this the end for her now... How would she escape was there no end to this ... 

© 2013 V.S.L.


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Out of the blue this cottage appeared from no-where. And Rose needed a safe haven to rest her weary head. The old woman answered the door gazed at Rose and smiled.
" You'd better had come in she sounded a concerned voice."
" thank you Ma i just need a couple of nights to gather my thoughts together."answered, Rose.

" I'll just show you your room, help yourself to a bath and i just get the supper ready."
Rose was feeling so relieved she ran off a bath and sank deeper into a mountain of bubbles...
She forgot about her troubles for a quick moment. Soon Rose felt clean and she quickly dried herself and put on the night things laid onto the bed..... Rose knocked on the lounge door.
"Do make yourself at home the tea has brewed said Mrs Smith."
" Thanks,' For your hospiletally."
" No problem my dear."
later that night she heard a thud and woke up rather started there in the garden were two strange men with guns. Was this the end for her now... How would she escape was there no end to this ...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Out of the blue this cottage appeared from no-where. And Rose needed a safe haven to rest her weary head. The old woman answered the door gazed at Rose and smiled.
" You'd better had come in she sounded a concerned voice."
" thank you Ma i just need a couple of nights to gather my thoughts together."answered, Rose.

" I'll just show you your room, help yourself to a bath and i just get the supper ready."
Rose was feeling so relieved she ran off a bath and sank deeper into a mountain of bubbles...
She forgot about her troubles for a quick moment. Soon Rose felt clean and she quickly dried herself and put on the night things laid onto the bed..... Rose knocked on the lounge door.
"Do make yourself at home the tea has brewed said Mrs Smith."
" Thanks,' For your hospiletally."
" No problem my dear."
later that night she heard a thud and woke up rather started there in the garden were two strange men with guns. Was this the end for her now... How would she escape was there no end to this ...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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