Mirror Mirror

Mirror Mirror

A Poem by caseymichelle31
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It's simple but I think it's effective.

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Mirror Mirror
Who is this girl I see?

Mirror Mirror
I don't like what's staring back at me

Mirror Mirror
Is this just my Destiny?

Mirror Mirror
Is this all I can possibly be?

Mirror Mirror
I don't feel in control or free

Mirror Mirror
Crack and shatter before me

Mirror Mirror
Help, I've lost all sense of my identity.

© 2014 caseymichelle31


Author's Note

caseymichelle31
Please let me know what you think, even if you think it's rubbish :)

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repitition ,rhyme .Its like a sad spell.It sounds pretty and I feel it.

Posted 9 Years Ago
This is not rubbish at all! I really liked the concept behind the piece and a lot of people can relate to this. Well done!

~Stefanie

Posted 10 Years Ago
Rubbish? Not at all! I'd say this articulates quite nicely the thoughts you have of yourself and the feeling of not being yourself. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

caseymichelle31

10 Years Ago

Aw, thank you very much :)

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Added on August 3, 2014
Last Updated on August 3, 2014
Tags: mirror, identity, girl, staring, destiny, dark, control, free, crack, shatter, lost, sense, help, pain, poem, poetry, sad, hope

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caseymichelle31
caseymichelle31

Sligo, Gurteen, Ireland



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Hi my name's Michelle. I'm definitely not a professional writer, or in fact anything close! Sure, I'm only 16. I sometimes write to express how I feel at a certain time and it helps so please be nice .. more..

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