As The Tables Turn.

As The Tables Turn.

A Poem by Carrion.
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I don't even know?

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Time hung heavy,
Screaming eyes' piercing into each others' souls,
Our hands grazing the ends of the cold table,
Who would turn it first?
You or I?
Neither!
We both deserve to die!
You and I,
We both will die,

and we will rot in our own self-loathing.

© 2012 Carrion.


Author's Note

Carrion.
Eh? I think I've improoved from last time.
Somewhat inspired by a musical.
Forget the name though.
Anyway, probably gonna get in trouble for this,
But for all you post-hardcore,deathcore, & metal lovers,
Check out my friends band, "Beneath The Trenches."
Sample from one of their songs;
" 'cause listen, I've got a broken heart, we have a broken bond, and soon you'll have a broken neck!"
-As Stars Fall, B.T.T.

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This was a good write. I really enjoyed reading this. The emotions were spot on. You did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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