Undertaker

The words were finally exchanged

They blossomed off his lips

And hesitated off mine

I smiled convincingly,

                 affectionately

and secretly broken

Will I always anticipate the end?

Will I always dress the dead?

Reviews

[Sesshy Uchiha]

I'm sorry but this poem is poorly written

[MFrano1]

It might be because I don't relate to this poem, but I just don't find it very moving or even that interesting of a read. Others correct me if I'm wrong because I know poetry, more than anything else, is judged in worth by who reads it. But my honest opinion (keeping in mind that others might not feel the same, so please don't let this discourage you) is that you need to work on flow and relatibility.