Wilhemina

What have I become?
In a body and mind that remains the same
Yet in which a soul no longer lingers
A creature of the night
Preying on the blood of the living
My lust and wrath in over-drive
With no conscience to speak of
No mere mortal any longer
A life eternal

Though what I crave most
A creature of the sunlight
His heat radiates through my cold lifeless body
Can he love me for what I really am?
Or will he simply die the victim
Doomed to walk hand-in-hand with death forever?

Will he kill the villain?
Will he save me from the monster I've become?
Will he be in time?

For I long to suck the life from him.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[Legion]

Angst occurs even within the undead. You depict this well. Not only the longing, but the confusion in the decision of what to do about it. Make him a victim or succumb to him. Think you would enjoy my two pieces "A Passion for Perfection" and "A Passion for Perfection II (The Vampyre's Dream Awakens)". Very similiar to your piece somewhat. Well done. :)

[NightDream]

I enjoyed it. It was very well written and a comfortable read. Then again I'm a "sucker" for a good vamp tale. :) ^*^