Changed

Changed

A Poem by Carolin Meisner

I’m not myself anymore,
That girl you once knew,
I’m different,
Not that weak daughter you could walk on,


treat however you want,
scream at,
or punch.


I’ve changed,
into something strong,
a girl you just never knew that I would become.

A girl who’s not scared for you anymore, 
a girl who won't hide,
 
a girl with a new bright soul,

who's got a new life goal.  

© 2011 Carolin Meisner


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You go, girl. This is empowerment right here.
May I offer a few suggestions? You don't have to take them, just...a thought, or two.

First stanza: Not that weak girl you used to step on, or walk on? Just gives me a tighter image than walk through.
Second stanza: Punch. Instead of punch at.
Third stanza: I've changed.
Fourth stanza: A girl who's not scared "of" you anymore/
Last line: Who's got a new life goal

Don't hate me:-/ Just the writer in me. This seems like a very personal piece and although it speaks of some awful things that have happened to the girl, her power and strength speak through and through. Kudos.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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you certainly have a talent, Excellent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Like the phoenix, a rebirth from the ashes of old. A strong write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You go, girl. This is empowerment right here.
May I offer a few suggestions? You don't have to take them, just...a thought, or two.

First stanza: Not that weak girl you used to step on, or walk on? Just gives me a tighter image than walk through.
Second stanza: Punch. Instead of punch at.
Third stanza: I've changed.
Fourth stanza: A girl who's not scared "of" you anymore/
Last line: Who's got a new life goal

Don't hate me:-/ Just the writer in me. This seems like a very personal piece and although it speaks of some awful things that have happened to the girl, her power and strength speak through and through. Kudos.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 29, 2011
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Kävlinge, Skåne, Sweden



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