Does He Know?

Does He Know?

A Poem by Ms. Lavender Love
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An intimate look at a sexual tryst

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He says I preached my sermon of “Never Again.”

But does he know why?

Does he know that my heart is fearless but my mind is not?

Does he know that with the ease of his hands each touch each movement caressing my body

each muscle each inch each surrounding molecule he knocked down my impenetrable wall.

For hours he liquefied my soul molding my skin beneath his hands. Fiending for that feeling to never stop he gained entrance to my secret garden. Where he tended to each and every flower like a master gardener until every petal yearned for his touch.

But does he know?

 

 

Does He Know?

 

© 2009 Ms. Lavender Love


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Wow...maybe HE knows I hope he does if not you need to tell him. This
is great reminds me of a friend of mines poem! it's short but it packs a
punch like a story. Lots of detail your metaphors are on point and
the flow of this piece is makes everything polished and fluid. Very nice!
I enjoyed it honestly

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The only comment I have is,
'sounds like love' and if 'he'
didn't know, he'd be a blind fool.
For feelings like that should be obvious.
I also have a poem by the same name.
I LOVE YOUR Version! lol

Welcome, once again, to the Cafe!

Peace n Light,
Wicahpi

Posted 15 Years Ago


Does he know? I think not truly! He enjoys being the director of the orchestra of which you are every instrument. He'll never truly know the complete emotional eruptions that flow from within thee due to his touch though he will forever desire to conduct your symphony into complete ecstacy.

Gee the later and more sleep deprived I become.... Sallie Bear

Posted 15 Years Ago


WELCOME, and so glad you joined! I read your poem when your friend, LostRose, posted it for you!
You will find that you will become more comfortable the more time you spend here, so join us often, and post your wonderful poetry as this one, and others to come.
And, please make your way around and read other writings.
You way with words, and please don't stop using them to entertain readers!
Sheila

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow...maybe HE knows I hope he does if not you need to tell him. This
is great reminds me of a friend of mines poem! it's short but it packs a
punch like a story. Lots of detail your metaphors are on point and
the flow of this piece is makes everything polished and fluid. Very nice!
I enjoyed it honestly

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am a thirty-nine year old female public servant. I enjoy reading and writing poetry. I think I like reading it a little more. Poetry is my therapy!!! more..

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