You (a word palindrome)

a word palindrome

 

Life- this for love! My plan to fail?

I maybe think you

are many of one that understand

plights of perception and points of view.

That those eyes and ears trust not,

should I error in judgment of thoughts;

those randomly dictate or construe

feelings- these wary and few hopes I sought.

Abuse of heart you lost. Have I gone too far?

I’m confused and complaining. Are people

really, truly, similar and unchanging? We are.

Alone work I, deranged and distraught.

You know I did little for

~You~

For little did I know you.

Distraught and deranged, I work alone.

Are we unchanging and similar, truly? Really

people are complaining and confused. I’m

far too gone. I have lost you, heart of abuse.

Sought I, hopes, few and wary. These feelings

construe, or dictate randomly, those

thoughts of judgment in error. I should

not trust ears and eyes, those that

view of points and perception of plights.

Understand that one of many are

you. Think maybe I

fail to plan my love for this life?

 

8-4-08

Reviews

[Carmen]

Thank you. :) This took me several hours to do. I have pumped them out in shorter times and I have also spent more time on these as well... i suppose it just depends on how well my head is working that day to adjust to backwards thinking. I honestly am not happy with this piece because I don't feel that it flows particularly well. Maybe I'll have to post some more to show you what i mean. :0

[Seriana]

Wow! I'm impressed. This is awesome! How long did it take you?
And yet, despite the structure of the piece, the message is very powerful. This is lovely, and painful, and truly a flawless piece. Nicely done. :)

[Poeticpiers]

A difficukt form to caarry off but you succeeded very well