I am

I am

A Poem by Carly Shaw

I Am...

I am the rock in the river.

keeping my ground

missing a sliver,

I am waiting to be found.


The touch of the water

would make you shiver

but I am stone,

not even a quiver.

Water rushes over me

pushing me to follow

But I will not break

I am not callow.

© 2012 Carly Shaw


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i like this poem, it makes you think deep about each line. Good write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was really beautiful! It was filled with a shining luster to the imagery and a power that brings about inspiration. Nice Ink!

Aaron

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i liked the shape and the content, very simple and short but at the same time has so much meanings of love passion and challenging. i did really enjoy it..thank you for the great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting piece on who you are, not bad, keep on writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 7, 2012
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