I AM CURDLED

It feels like
There’s a throbbing
Mass leaking like
A bruised rotten
Tomato in my
Cranium

If you tilt me
To the side
The mushy
Rank guts in
My head
Trickle out
My ears

All green with
Yellow chunks
It slides and
Squeezes its
Way out and
Stains my
Pillowcase

Crush me until
It all comes out
Until I am empty
And maybe then
Everything won’t
Feel so heavy

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

you have to let it all out all the crushed feelings the gooey yuk ive hit rock bottom many times in my life then feel better especially if i pray at rock bottom.
i hope it all works out for you pray and let it all out ask God to take the muck away he has already if you let him in
believe me ive been there many times not just saying this to you
a good poem
i felt your pain and yearning

[Lost]

Thank you Julie :) I appreciate you review as always

[barleygirl]

I love you and Juliespenhere read requested me becuz she knew I would. I am a Halloweenie and I love macabre writing. What makes yours so fun is that I've never heard anything like it. I love the word "curdled" which is very yukky & you carry this concept thru your whole poem. It's hard to be original in this genre, so it's great to read something detailed & descriptive like this (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lost]

Thank you very much Margie! :)