BIRD BONES

Moving slower today 

But feeling lighter 

Because last night 

I was drained 

My energy and will 

The marrow of my bones 

Seeped out 

Through my pores 

While I was sleeping 

And I woke up 

Feeling lighter 

Like if my shoes 

Weren’t heavy enough 

To hold me down 

I’d float away 

And disappear 

The altitude 

Would drink up 

All my oxygen 

And make my head 

Feel the familiar 

Fuzzy pressure 

Of fainting 

Making me feel 

Lighter and lighter 

And I would drift away 

Higher and higher 

Until I faded away 

Into nothing 

At all

Reviews

[Dusted Armor]

I love this write as in my own i can relate. Good structure and words went well with flow, I was captured through the whole write. Great job. Keep penning

[Lost]

Thank you! :)

[Dusted Armor]

Welcome-Keep up the great works