Clear Fence

inspired by my sister's idea.

The grape jelly has become overpraised.

Strawberry is where it's at.

Clear paint won't make it invisible.

I'm just another photo in the album of myspace's biggest camera w****.

I'm bringing you down with my dismal attitude.

You got some glad tupaware for me.

My insignificance is like a fog.

You can see through it sometimes.

The darkness takes over my soul.

(how original)

 

 

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

Wow, I really liked this piece. So different, and yes, original, of other pieces of its kind. I liked the imgaery here, it was really cleverly intergrated, and inventive. A poem that seems almost apathetic and yet, emotional at once.

Your work is really good. You're very talented and inventive! :D

[Michael X]

This is a peculiar expressed abstraction, in part to the unique, droning, downward flow that
captured the emotion that explains the common overshadowing the things that break new barriers.
insightful, you did an artful job