Significance.

had an inspiration when i asked a question. (:

Like a philtrum.

The last squirt of toothpaste.

A lone snowflake on a july morning.

The aglets of your soul.

Always becomes never.

A promise becomes a lie.

The scale of the universe makes our significance become less than hoped for.

Reviews

[Ellusive Rose]

I think this is a fabulous poem. I like the tone in it. And I can get an understanding of what the poem is really about. Good job! You're doing great! Keep Writing!

[Emily Elizabeth]

A fantastic poem! I really loved this, the concept was very clever. Short, but sweet and effective, a really nice piece. Rather bleak and honest tone, really suited the context.