Sing to Me One More Time

This one actually rhymes.... xD easy rhyme though...so not so interesting =/ ^-^

I want to hear your celestial voice
trickle slowly down my ear.
I want a sweet whisper
just soft enough to hear.
Give me chills
down my spine.
I want you to know
I claim you as mine.
Kill me slowly with wishes
bring me back to life.
I will always love you
through pain and strife.
Keep me warm for a little longer.
Just one more time...then I'll be stronger.
Sweet melodies float in my head.
I'll dream of them while I'm in bed.
Hear my heart beat
slow and fast.
But we all know
this wont last.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. In the end. We hope things can last forever. Love need to be protected. Never say words that are negative and painful. Words are permanent scars.
"Kill me slowly with wishes
bring me back to life.
I will always love you
through pain and strife."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chris]

Welcome back by the way...

Evening wishes for silent eves.

[Peach]

Much appreciated. :)

[Chris]

yes, you actually are appreciated and it just takes time to realize it.

[Michael G. Smith]

Ah, the ghost of love rears it's ugly head to haunt and taunt once again.

[Robyn]

i disagree! i think the poem is still interesting even if the rhyme scheme is simple
nice work

[SAAV13]

I've been reading your poems the past few minutes and every single one of them is gorgoues (is it weird to call a poem gorgoues?)

I love how abstract they all are, yet they have a bit of a twisted side and I love that... It's a side of you I rarely see in person

[deeps]

This is wonderful
I enjoyed the flow and rhythm of this.
Well written.

[Kelley]

That wasn't bad at all, as a matter of fact I liked it!.....smiles
I loved the line....

"Kill me slowly with wishes"

That was a cool line.
So.....great write thanks for sharing.


Kelley