Snake

As you slowly slither away like a snake with dark past.

How times past sheared   some memories as you try in slither back into my thoughts.

I hiss with fight in my heart for how I will not let you swirl around my heart no more.

As you slide away into your hide hole thinking your save  , I swallow you hole .

Reviews

[Emrick]

Honestly speaking this "snake idea"is outstanding.if i was to rate this out of 10.id give you 9.
nice work.

[Kaitlyn Raiford]

It is different, I encourage you to keep writing. It seems to be quite confusing, though I sense your writing style is mysterious and vague. Good luck.