guidance

erm not sure about this .....what do you readers think ?

I look to you for guidance  

All you showed was destruction

Oh how I wish wasn’t so   jealousy of love (fake bitter) love  

What I thought was love was just hate

Oh how wish present meets future so we know our outcome

Oh why does living in this empty cold world became so confusing

Oh how wish I was still that innocent girl that thought love was simply myth

Instead I fell hard with truth of knowing we will never be same …..

Yet we try so hard making it work this love that’s twisting, swirling, pulling ripping our hearts right out of us.

While fate holds our fate in tip of her hands like sand slips right through her hands .

I look to you for assistance  

Reviews

[Emrick]

sad n full of emotions.nice poem but i think the title isnt suitable.