I wish I never knew

Written late at night when I should have been sleeping but the words kept me up.

I wish I never knew

What it felt like to be loved by you.

So warm your gentle hands

On my cold back at our first dance.

Do you remember?

Last December?

When the world was white

And life was suddenly so bright?

Do you remember?

Last December?

When the world was white

And life was suddenly a fight?

Oh, I wish I never knew

What it felt like to be loved by you.

Author's Note

Fire away! (respectfully:))

Reviews

[Quickbeam]

I remember when I fell for someone on our second date..when it started to snow and I kissed her in the snowflakes on the middle of Millennium bridge in London. So this is very poignant for me, thanks and well done :-)

[A Glow in the Pit of My..]

This feels very familiar, like a song playing on a jukebox in some dimly lit bar somewhere. Great job on it!

[Bri-lynn]

this is so relevant it stings, I can feel the emotion in this piece- absolutely beautiful!

[Raghib]

loved the usage of one event indicating two different things . keep writing .

[Jennesis]

It’s Always nice to get your feelings out with words. Heartbreak heals slowly, and I for one am still happy to have known what it is to love. We have an infinite capacity to love, there no such thing as ‘all your heart’. Keep writing!

[Anjali]

This is so good. Absolutely adored it! I'm shocked to see that this doesn't have any feedback, cuz it's really good. Keep writing!

[Elorac]

Thank you so much for your review! This is the first poem I ever posted and your review is hence the first one I ever received! Thank you for taking the time to comment, it means a lot!

[Anjali]

It deserves a lot of comments. You are very welcome!