Agnostic Revisited

I looked for it in Church, this thing they call Faith.
The arches were pretty, the air was still
but in the dusty gloom
Of all those criss-crossed chantrys,
I found only
Dust and crumpled petals of
Other people's belief.

I searched for it in school, during many hours of
mindnumbing recital,
Genesis, Exodus, Leviticus Deuteronomy, Numbers......
As if it mattered,
which order they came in, for the sense
to me was always missing.

I learned a tale, a pretty fable,
of fishes and loaves,
heroic escapades and blessed passovers,
told daily that
this was the God of me, the one true faith, superior,
in form and style, to all others
Church of England,
King James and his jolly bible
A history of the world according to whom?

Today I learned another Genesis, another creation,
Similar to my own, but different....
Four thousand years different
Other Gods, other times, other faiths....
Same story
So tell me Mr Fisher, Religious Education Teacher,
Bald and boring,
which story did you teach me?

Was it truth we sought on dry afternoons
with Genesis
And Exodus?
Was it God, or Yahweh, that saved Moses
from the wrath of the pharoahs he cheated?
Did the secrets of Solomon come,
not from God, but from Sumer,
from the Seat of Life
From the silty mouth of the Tigris and the lush
Euphrates fruit bowl, from the land of oil,
And war?

Here lie the tablets of a different history,
before the legends
of Christ, these other origins of Darwin,
in the time of Heroes,
the clash of the Titans,
Here where Mohammad and Jacob are forever opposed
Beneath the eye of Horus, the valley of gold
In the fields of the Nefilim, under the light
of a true Creator,
Here lies a bible submerged in mud,
Buried by the flood
and the faith you imposed.

Mr Fisher. You should have looked further than the end of King James

Reviews

[Sam Freeland]

Your search of the scriptures was well told
we all need to do what you did
before getting old
when we no longer care
what the scribes have said
with nothing in our future
to be anything but dead
agnostics will question
as you have done
I too have similar opinions
and we are not alone.....excellent writing....sam

[Captain Ugly]

Smart piece of writing. Well said. Not sure I agree with it fully, but the presentation and thought provoking points are absolutely undeniable. Faith? Guess I'm still searching.
Just me.
Capt. Ugly

[Kat]

This is amazing. I was raised catholic and I know what you mean about finding the stories hard to believe, especially when science is changing the facts all the time. It's hard to have faith. Lovely poem.

[maggie42]

ahhhh The Enuma Elish , and such.

"Here lies a bible submerged in mud,
Buried by the flood
and the faith you imposed. "

This is suberb :)

[LaPluma]

This is an interesting perspective on Christianity and Judaism. One thing holds true in most all religions one can study. There has always been war and killing in name of their gods.....tell me one religion that has not been subject to this? Good thought provoking poem.

[Aimee Mahathy]

I like this. And I agree, in the fact that I simply find it all barely believable. I like how you described it as stories. Very well written!
Good job!