Heart on Fire

Heart on Fire

A Poem by Carey Lenehan
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A Poem about the frustration of Writers Block

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I'm not inspired by love today
And with the sky a solid grey
The world of nature leaves me numb
I'm trying but the words won't come

I'm not much lifted by my child
Absorbed in cartoon heaven
In fact there isn't much at all
To bring me words unbidden

Yet I need to purge my mind
Let feelings out I cannot find
Speak of things profound and deep
Not let my inspiration sleep

Frustration is a tangled web
It's trapped my words again
Immersed me in its sticky thread
And bound up all my pain

I can feel the words are there
But cannot find them anywhere
There's war and loss and death and fear
Out in the world both far and near

I want to tell you how I feel
But nothing's happening to me
Lost in a world that isn't real
I'm floating in a wordless sea

Trees are green, the day is cold
Rain is falling on my world
Kids dying hungry as I sit
Looking at the words I've writ

Nothing matters anyway
I haven't got a clue
There's not much wrong with me today
I've only lost my view

Once there were a thousand things
My ready words could give them wings
Eloquence and elegance
Challenging deliverance

Now here I sit in emptiness
Drained of all but blank desire
Brimful of things I can't express
My brain like ice, my heart on fire

© 2008 Carey Lenehan


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Beautifully said Carey...you penned this so well. Every stanza was a gem and I especially
loved the last one. Good job! Thanks for submitting this to my contest. ~ Helena

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is so great, it just gallops along and the rhymes fit perfectly. Expresses what so many writers feel like when they have stuff to say but cant' get it out. Cool poem


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is awesome! Wow I loved it :) I especially liked the end. It was brilliant. Emptiness, drained and blank paint a really bleak picture, but you finish on such a colourful, awesome way. Favourited :D

Posted 16 Years Ago



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