Soulmate

Soulmate

A Poem by chico

How can I still live for today

How can I still breathe for my life

How can I still feel the pain for my soul

How can I still dream for all hope

 

How can I still walk when earth dying

How can I still be wise when others lie

How can I still cry when tears is gone

How can I still smile when hurt is come

 

All because one smile

one hope

one tears

one love

and it's because of you

I'll keep all the thing till my last breathe

 

© 2008 chico


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Thanks for your review,.that can make me to write more better for next..thanks.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Interesting format. At first, I found the repitition a bit too much, but the ending format seemed to clean it up.

You can feel the gratitude of the character in this piece.

Thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 24, 2008
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chico
chico

Bandar Seri Begawan, Brunei



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