Hate

I feel so empty

My heart so broke

Love just passed me away

There's nothing here anymore

 

Lover is a shadow

Friendship is an empty space

Hate squeezing my whole heart

And I'm in the darkness

 

World never spining round

The Blind man needs light

All slave needs freedom

But when hate stiil keepin on every soul

No paradise will shown

Reviews

[alyssa]

Verywell done!!LOVE IT!!

[SN]

I like!
"Love just passed me away" - this is so powerful.

[Chaos]

I agree with the last review. I would have called it empty or void. Your hate is longing for love.


Great write!

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[Lia]

Great piece, I wouldn't have called it hate though. Well done x