Love

Something on this planet makes me addicted

My blood stream feels unusual

My heart sitting by the angel

My soul grasps the universe

 

Every corner is a beautiful scene

No place couldn't forget

There's a peace inside

For every hug and kisses never lost

 

Our laugh and smile is an extraordinary moments

Our rebellion is a fervour of life

Every step we walk is a way to happiness

All the thing and kindly for those word

I called L.O.V.E

 

 

Reviews

[Chaos]

I find it interesting in the beginning of love, the road that WE share is free from thickets and thorns and as time goes by and our love has its shine sullied, the road is laden with some minor debris. Our love is tested and twisted by the experiences of life and love and as a result our love becomes somewhat jaded and then the road is covered with rocks and branches. Then one day, time marches our love even further to the edge of dispair and suddenly when we're not aware, there is a wall in the middle of the road, too wide to walk around and too high to climb over and our love is seperated; I'm on one side and you on the other; love is gone once again.

I loved the piece. If a piece can make me feel than it causes me to transport my mind to a realm known only to me.

Thank you for sharing your work.