Optimism

Confusion
Standing by the door
Misunderstanding
Sitting on the bed
Pain
Looking in the mirror
Fear
Vomiting in the bathroom
Patience
Leaning out the window
Hope
Holding keys to the door
Love
Waiting on the other side...

 

Holding hands with you.

Reviews

[Lee E. Powell]

Perfect ending, this was a splendid poem

[deadlife]

Life dear..You've written it..beautiful..
Very much beautiful.
Amazing.

Blessings..
-rupam

[Eagle Cruagh]

A story of living, confessions from
depths of the soul, aspirations on the
wind, potential at the door.
This is an intriguing story, the condensation
of a book, all wrapped up and delivered in the
little words, pain, fear, patience, hope and love.
Very well done, great story.
Thank You !
---- Eagle Cruagh