healing the insanity

just ramblings.

Trying to cope in healing the insanity

          I brought upon me, someday I'll be sane...

Someday I’ll be ok that the truth behind me

                                   Will just fade away…

I’m not who you think I am

I’m just a stranger in this farfetched world

I wish you’ll be gone Misery

      For I just want a peaceful life

Pretty normal in the eyes of everyone…

 

Reviews

[Joseph M. Shea]

Hi, This piece seems to me to be pergring in away. Insanity is a word that comes up in my work from time to time. One piece that come to mind it The Cure. It's post here and you are welcome to read it. I think I know how your feeling and even more what your thinking. All my relationships wore intents and the link with the people I loved very strong. For a time and time changes very thing. The strong be come weak and the weak strong. The blend is lost and you have to go find your self again.
I didn't worry about me when I was with her, She kept me grounded and in action. Then that eneded I had to redifine my self. I was very lost for a time. But I had my music and my writing to keep me going. I don't ask the big queston any more. No anser would satisfy me. I'm just here doing the best I can. Well you got me thinking and thats a good thing, Thanks, Take care, Joe

[captain]

I hear you sir, sometimes i find comfort in my poetry or i draw just to escape the crazy world i live in. I could say ART is a great escape. Keep doing what you do sire, and I'll keep mine too. Thank you very much in reading & reviewing my poem.

[Joseph M. Shea]

I was at one time trying to change my self and be some one elts. But in the end there I was and I have to be who I'am. Some I loved, called me a bleeding heart, others saw me as sad. But the richness I found in those feeling, I wouldn't trade for anything. So I guest I'm stuck being a broken hearted man, For now any ways. We'll see what the next chaper brings. Take care, Joe

[captain]

Even though I tried to pretend, I still see myself in the end. No matter what I do – pretending is not really the solution, our close friends and family knows that. I try to be more perceptive – then look for a positive outlook to keep up from the hard life. I like what you said, we experienced sad things but we always do look forward for the next daily chapter our lives. Thank you very much sir, your feedback i really appreciate that :)

[Joseph M. Shea]

That's very cool captain. I like to reach people and have them reach me. It opens my mind and out look on things. For me it's all about passion. Love starts with one self and then to others, Take care, Joe

[An owl on the moon]

A hungering for sanity and peace so many long for.. Your words speak so well to a world gone mad.

[captain]

Always a pleasure to see you around my writes, I'm greatful and thankful for that. :) have an inspiring day to you Sir.

[Holly Mason]

a peaceful life sounds good..thank you for sharing good read

[captain]

thank you for the visit and review.

[Muse]

"Misery" is never good company...he/she always adding weight to our physical bodies and clouding our thoughts. So many days where I feel legally insane...yet there's days when I look in the mirror and say "yeah I'm okay" and the cloud of grey lifts away.

[Cole Hayley]

I love the title, and the peice just gives so much insane depth to it. I love the ending,

[Sami Khalil]

Inner turmoil and unhappiness we all feel it and want to get out of its prison . We need the freedom that love brings and the peace that sanity bestows . A good write Captain ....:)

[captain]

oh, you have a new pic, looks like the singer pitbull, :D thank your so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

My lady want me to shave bald . She thinks I look more sexy ...LOl
You are welcome.

[Renée]

Great expression about Turmoil and like misery & peace..." normal in the eyes of everyone"..

[captain]

thank you, friend. I hate that feeling turmoil sometimes for they appear just out of nowhere.

[Renée]

Listening.