healing the insanity

just ramblings.

Trying to cope in healing the insanity

          I brought upon me, someday I'll be sane...

Someday I’ll be ok that the truth behind me

                                   Will just fade away…

I’m not who you think I am

I’m just a stranger in this farfetched world

I wish you’ll be gone Misery

      For I just want a peaceful life

Pretty normal in the eyes of everyone…

 

Reviews

[Joseph M. Shea]

Hi, This piece seems to me to be pergring in away. Insanity is a word that comes up in my work from time to time. One piece that come to mind it The Cure. It's post here and you are welcome to read it. I think I know how your feeling and even more what your thinking. All my relationships wore intents and the link with the people I loved very strong. For a time and time changes very thing. The strong be come weak and the weak strong. The blend is lost and you have to go find your self again.
I didn't worry about me when I was with her, She kept me grounded and in action. Then that eneded I had to redifine my self. I was very lost for a time. But I had my music and my writing to keep me going. I don't ask the big queston any more. No anser would satisfy me. I'm just here doing the best I can. Well you got me thinking and thats a good thing, Thanks, Take care, Joe

[captain]

I hear you sir, sometimes i find comfort in my poetry or i draw just to escape the crazy world i live in. I could say ART is a great escape. Keep doing what you do sire, and I'll keep mine too. Thank you very much in reading & reviewing my poem.

[Joseph M. Shea]

I was at one time trying to change my self and be some one elts. But in the end there I was and I have to be who I'am. Some I loved, called me a bleeding heart, others saw me as sad. But the richness I found in those feeling, I wouldn't trade for anything. So I guest I'm stuck being a broken hearted man, For now any ways. We'll see what the next chaper brings. Take care, Joe

[captain]

Even though I tried to pretend, I still see myself in the end. No matter what I do – pretending is not really the solution, our close friends and family knows that. I try to be more perceptive – then look for a positive outlook to keep up from the hard life. I like what you said, we experienced sad things but we always do look forward for the next daily chapter our lives. Thank you very much sir, your feedback i really appreciate that :)

[Joseph M. Shea]

That's very cool captain. I like to reach people and have them reach me. It opens my mind and out look on things. For me it's all about passion. Love starts with one self and then to others, Take care, Joe

[Justine]

I really identify with this having had one of the most unsettled years of my life. I have had to shed so much and I am determined not to carry it through into 2014. I like the line "someday I'll be sane" but how will you know :) and show me anyone who's "sane" as I just can't tell any more. Your final lines speak a truth that made me pause for a moment. yes it's true that others do judge, often with their eyes closed. I really liked this. justine.

[captain]

This piece is really close to home or my heart. It's something that I am hoping for in life, that someday, somehow... Thank you just much Justine, it's so nice to read your thoughts and shared experience about the piece. I greatly appreciate that!

[Caradoc]

Sometimes I wonder and think, perhaps humanity thrive on misery. So much effort is spent to better human lives, even if the fruits of the effort often benefit only a select few. I wonder what would happen were our misery to truly be healed. What would we do then?

This is a thought provoking piece, at least for me. In fact, it reminds me of the song, "Misplaced" by Sonata Arctica.

Here's to hoping the Misery and Insanity fade, to be replaced by something better, something that gives you renewed hope and purpose.

Be well, Captain.

-Caradoc

[captain]

You too, Caradoc. And thank you.

I think you are right, many people thrive on the misery game. It is upon us on how to handle it. It's not something we can all avoid, perhaps its part of our nature to have this insane feeling. It's part on how we grow as part of the human race. You such an insightful person Caradoc, glad that you've shared it with me in this piece.

[Caradoc]

You're very welcome, Captain.

[Angi]

I have been here, Captain. Sometimes, that dark cloud hovers so close above my head that I can't see a thing. Writing always helps the sun start to peek through. Wishing you light!

[captain]

Thank you Miss Angi. Yes writing helps that's why i keep my personal journal close, it made me realize many things.

[Mockingbird]

sounds like someone coping with a mental illness and is stigmatized by those around you, look at you differently. this causes you despair and misery to be ostracized like that. people can be so ignorant and insensitive. of course i am probably completely off so i apologize.

[MOON]

Sometimes the thoughts in our heads drive us mad , we bring the misery yet all we seek is peace of mind to be normal. Poignant write, well said.

[captain]

thank you Moon. :)

[Dhaye]

A wonderful poem! I like it. It reminds me of somebody 15 years ago...Somebody who wanted to be free from the misery of life. That's me. But I also learned that this is life. We have to survive from aches of this world...from our fellowmen. That we don't only need to be good to their eyes...because people are good critics...They are too judgmental. We must live according to our choices, not theirs. Because this is our life, not theirs.

[captain]

truly you understand life's all about and the choices we partake. Thank you so much, for the time and review dhaye :)

[Dhaye]

You're much welcome.

[captain]

Those hungers for sanity make us insane and even insaner, how insane is life? it is pretty insane. To be sane, is even more insane. I think I just like you the way you are. However this was heartfelt and beautiful. It is only a phase... it could be next week totally different. And that's what I enjoyed out of here. All is about perception.

- Elisa :)

[captain]

your a smart woman you are Miss. I admire your grace, thank you. :)

[Tree]

A humbling piece of simple art. In this case, and in life in general most of the time simplicity is the best thing. here you don't ask for much, but only the bare minimum... A touch of sadness, in this heartfelt poem

Diego

[Pax]

such sad thoughts my friend...
your pretty normal to me...
keep writing!