the basic flow

In the beginning, we were one
Then nothingness and boredom split us into halves
Planes bifurcate throughout space and time
Only to collect our pieces back to none

Through polarities, we swayed
Karma loosening and tightening our knots
Only to be pulled by the gravity of our center
We become something and nothing at once

Reviews

[Aaron H. Ardea]

This is beautiful don't change a thing. If anything, re-use this topic / concept for other styles. (This is another one that resonates with me... I should probably be giving better criticism though haha)

[AO_Fulcrum]

feeler of physics you are eh, friend? a pleasure to meet you.