fireflies

fireflies

A Poem by captain93

you shine so bright
you fly so true
i'm powerless but to love you.

you're all i want
you're all i need
take my hand and be my lead.
 
i love your strength
i admire your glow
all i need is for you to know.

i'm almost there
i'm almost clear
just past all that hate and fear.

© 2010 captain93


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yes thanks that is what i meant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple, yet a good write! I think you meant for "your" to be
"you're all I want
you're all I need"

Fireflies are so powerful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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