two part heart

two part heart

A Poem by captain93
"

the struggles of feelings

"
My heart leaps
when I see him
                            My heart
falls
                                               when I see him
My heart sings
when we touch 
                                My heart screams
                                                 when we touch
My heart lives
with him
                             My heart dies
                                                 with him
this must be
right
                            this is so
                                               wrong
he is my
hero

                            he is my
                                              nemesis
he is my
salvation
                            he is my
                                               damnation
he is all I
love
                              he is all I should
                                              hate.

© 2010 captain93


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man I dont know whether to love or hate this no really this is cool I love the two sides and two views being almost opposite but it is true there is a thin line between love and hate love the format very original an that is good always to be original

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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man I dont know whether to love or hate this no really this is cool I love the two sides and two views being almost opposite but it is true there is a thin line between love and hate love the format very original an that is good always to be original

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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